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CE:. Koi Under Tha Sea

Published: Apr 2, 2012

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Here you go! I really hope you like it!!! I worked really hard on this! It had over 16 Layers! WHOO HOOOO!!! My first underwater scene!!!

I failed at the coral..... I failed at a lot of stuff

art(c) ME
Koi(c)

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DreamRoseBrook151

Apr 2, 2012

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Uh, this is only my second critique, so don't mind it if you find some mistakes...

Okay, pros and cons... I'll do cons first, save the best for last!
Cons...
Pretty much only two things...
1) If you could just make the light rays a bit more spread out and thick at the bottom that'd be awesome
2) Why is the sand blurry? Could you just make it a teeny bit more clear?

NOW PROOOOS!!!
I love the shading you did, it looks awesome! I also like the variety of sea creatures too, and how you used your creativity on the colors. The bubbles are cute too! The pose is also great, keep at making them unique!!!

So, ya, this was my critique for this piece of art of yours! Hope you consider it! <333